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Binomial Coefficient definition should precede discussion of Binomial Theorem and Pascal's Triangle

The definition of the binomial coefficient in terms of what it means numerically should precede discussion of binomial theorem. Reader quite possibly may only want to know what it means and have no interest in binomial theorem or Pascal Triangle.RHB100 (talk) 21:31, 11 August 2012 (UTC)

This is not a difficult article to navigate: a person interested in formulas for binomial coefficients need only look at the table of contents for the well-labeled sections with the word "formula" in their titles. Please see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section to read about what a lead section is supposed to accomplish; notably, "The lead should be able to stand alone as a concise overview. It should define the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points." Your sentence is detrimental to almost all of these goals, and distracts emphasis from the important definitions to less-important formulas. --JBL (talk) 02:24, 11 August 2012 (UTC)

The article at present is either deliberately designed to confuse readers or it is so poorly written that it confuses the reader as much as if it had been deliberate. The statement above implying that the definition of the binomial coefficient , , where the notation, , called n factorial is defined by with , is of less importance than Pascal's triangle and such is a very ignorant and stupid statement. RHB100 (talk) 21:31, 11 August 2012 (UTC)

Go have a read of WP:Civility and perhaps we can talk. It seems to me possible that a formula (or a pointer to the section on formulas) could be worked into the introduction somewhere, but you're very much going about it the wrong way. --JBL (talk) 18:11, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
I fully agree with that —specially about the civility issue. The factorial expression could i.m.o. be easily incorporated in the lead — not the way RHB100 has in mind though, as that would indeed be 100% orthogonal to Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. I have made an attempt at doing so. I think this can work. - DVdm (talk) 18:43, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

OK, I think it is somewhat better now. However, I think it should be kept in mind that some people may not be familiar with the factorial operator. Therefore I think a definition of the factorial operator for the simplest case of positive integers and zero before getting into the more advanced part of the article would be desirable. RHB100 (talk) 19:15, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Mentioning factorials would i.m.o. clutter up the lead. The reader is explicitly pointed to factorials in all their glory in the section Binomial coefficient#Factorial formula. Remember the guidelines about the lead: the keywords to go with are concise overview and summarize. - DVdm (talk) 20:00, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
I think the current phrasing (while obviously better than the original) is somewhat cluttered -- that sentence is now doing an awful lot of work. Better would be to make it its own sentence (a little later in the paragraph). In fact, though, I think it would be even better to replace the formula with a sentence like the following: "There are several simple formulas (both recursive and explicit) for computing binomial coefficients -- see the section below for details." This serves the purpose of mentioning and pointing to the formulas without cluttering the lead or detracting from the more important definitions (namely, that these are the coefficients that appear in the binomial theorem, and their combinatorial interpretation). --JBL (talk) 20:09, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Hm, I wouldn't opt for a see-below-like-kind-of-easteregg like you suggested. But yes, I see your point. Indeed, the sentence is doing too much work now, so I have moved the calculation into its own sentence — let's have the work done by two sentences, right? There are indeed several simple formulas, but I dare assume, so to speak, that we can all agree that the factorial expression is the most common and most notable... so how about this? - DVdm (talk) 21:29, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Would you object to replacing "Under suitable circumstances" with "When n and k are nonnegative integers"? Should there be a remark about the fact that they can be defined more generally? Or is this too much for the lead? Edit: ok, the remark about generalizing comes later, is fine there, and shouldn't be repeated. The first question stands. --JBL (talk) 21:43, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Re the first question: I wouldn't mind —provided n-k is required to be a nonnegint as well, which would add slightly more clutter again— but I don't think we really need that in this lead. - DVdm (talk) 22:05, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Good point. --JBL (talk) 22:06, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

(In english please. It's hard to know what is just jibber jabber and what is solid useful math language!)